Hold Up!
First off - props for even attempting this man. I really love the way you tranced out the melody, that sounds wicked.
The bassline is seriously fat, just rolls. The breakdown is awesome from mellow to rough nicely done.
Your production is tight , everything sounds clear.
Only thing I could say, but thats just being picky i guess is maybe you don't need so much of the vocal in there.
Well done though, pulled it off very well.
