I like the ideas behind the intro, but the melody comes in a little sudden.
The snare sounds too small next to the kick and too drum machiny for the vibe of the track. The fills are good tho.
2 minutes in... dnb on the way?

Ahh, the drop. This is a very unique track (you get a point for that). As I said the snares need to be louder. The drum patterns really keep this track moving.
I'm not feeling the bass. Sounds like it has too much chorus.