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Submitted by Dj Obscure on Tue, 2006-05-16 22:29.



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feeling this mr obscure

Submitted by Golem on Thu, 2006-05-25 20:42.

feeling this mr obscure Sticking out tongue well done for this one i think your skill has improved greatly since we first met your style has evolved aswell from jumpy rollers to dark rolling jumpers! loving the samples in this tune i think this is your best tune IMO very intensifying  bass is nice and deep and the levels on this tune are nice ! well done m8

again another nice tune,

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Submitted by Terra-Rise on Fri, 2006-05-26 09:58.

again another nice tune, nice intro and drop, mix is clean aswell.  The bass could do with some more ummmf in the bottom end, it sounds alittle hollow and the strings could do with a little bit of rework.


i think the bassline is too

Submitted by kondencuotas pienas on Wed, 2006-05-24 20:25.

i think the bassline is too loud. the kick should be punchier in this kind of dnb. i think. sorry if i'm wrong Smiling

again.. i miss some more details, instruments, variations..

The tune sets up well

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Submitted by Mista Rilla on Sat, 2006-05-27 01:22.

The tune sets up well building a dischordant atmosphere and sense of unsettling discomfort which I'm all in favour of.  Not so much the bassline after that.  It doesn't seem to fit well with the other elements.  Loving those strings and the atmosphere, swap out the bass and I'd love it more  Eye-wink


99 - Obscure, your tracks

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Submitted by Contayjen on Mon, 2006-05-29 15:35.

99 - Obscure, your tracks stand out a mile man.  There's a certain dissonence that you get from having a complete disregard for harmony Eye-wink  That said, there's something about this track that makes it work better.  Its dark and funky and though I'm not keen on the the style of vocals you choose, they work better on this than your previous 2 tracks.  The beats are strong and clear and the arrangement is good.  Sub is phat though the melody seems a little simplistic in the 2nd half of the riff.  There is nice use of filter lfo on it for the end of the phrase.


the intro was promesing but

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Submitted by Stockholm on Sat, 2006-05-27 06:46.

the intro was promesing but when the tune kicks in at 1,48  it was a disapotment. i thot theres was gona be a fast lead o this tune. the bassline is good du and the beat to same whit the mastering.


thought the itro was well

Submitted by DJ Shiver on Sat, 2006-06-03 16:37.

thought the itro was well good, really haunting but the rest of the tune's totally different! when it drops it seems really empty, maybe needs something to fill some mid range? i dunno,

Nothing special

Submitted by Bladetone on Thu, 2006-05-25 15:38.

Nothing special

so I was excited about this

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Submitted by synrgy on Wed, 2006-05-24 16:24.

so I was excited about this one at first, but then when it came out of the breakdown it was a pretty big let down.  It sounded like you were building up to something pretty huge, and then it just fell flat with the same old jump-uppy bassline and 2 step beat.

arrangment: the placment of your parts is good, you seem to have a good feel for the dnb record format, but I feel like I've heard this bassline a hundred times before.

eq-ing: snare is weak.  needs either a boosted layer or just a boost itself, I'm not sure which.  Honestly, I couldn't sit through it long enough to break it down much further than that.

You're gonna be mad, but I gotta give this a 4.5, and you're really only getting points for the arrangment outside of the bassline, and since this is drum n bass we're talking about, the bassline is virtually half the battle.


This sounds a bit

Submitted by Mike Native on Thu, 2006-06-01 17:01.

This sounds a bit disjointed. levels are wrong
I don't want to be rude but i don't like it
sorry

wikked kick drums i know how

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Submitted by 822 on Tue, 2006-05-30 22:04.

wikked kick drums i know how to do that, the two drums after the other in quick succesion - death metalish sounding. opps the bass line melody is not too good. kind of goofy starting around 1:50 lets see what the break brings.  ok the bass melody is different but still kind of goofy