Look, it's Liam Neeson as Ra's Aghul from Batman!  Love the beginning beat and the quotes and the way they play with each other.  I like how you use the bats fluttering  and the cape and stuff as added effects.  Love how the track's feeling really complies to the quotes being used.  OK I love what you have so far, but you only have 2 1/2 minutes.  That's the worste tease I've ever had in my life.  I don't know if that's intentional or what, but I wanted to hear the whole song.