loving the dub/industrial beat and pattern but needs more elements in the intro pad needs to be louder and the amen clashes with the main drum pattern, the vocal is nice, the bass doesnt do it for me either i think it doesnt roll enough and i can tell you wanted this to roll but the amen over the drum pattern makes it sound unintentional like you've just slappen on an amen and not even chopped it to fit with the main break i thought break would be heavier aswell, this tune needs more variation and elements IMO sorry if i am being harsh im only trying to help this is nothing personal m8!