Nice atmos on the intro.  The cymbal hits sounded so crystal and crisp... which leads me to the first thing that really hit me: the beats sound really lo-fi or muffled like they're playing through a wall or something when compared to the cymbal hits.  While those beats are still phat and there're some top notch edits and filters in there the constant 8 beat pitch shifting wore me out pretty early on cos it's really the beat that's carrying this tune.  I did enjoy the vocal stabs 
For me this tune was a bit of a roller, I liked it but it didn't seem to go anywhere really. 
You obviously put a lotta work into your beats and did a wicked job.  However I think that musically there could've been a bit more than the harmonic sub and atmos synth to pull it along.