nice buildup of intro elements goin on... break fits perfect when it comes in, perhaps it's a bit too motched on the eq tho. maybe it's just the snare. rolling along nicely... nice atmospheric breakdown, vox sits well there too. nice use of panning. on the drop.. ooooh i love that rinsed-out bassline! although it sounds a little to wide on the stereo image imo. not my normal fave style overall, but well done nonetheless. nice hats/cyms. perhaps a bit less rev-cymbal (esp in the second breakdown) would be better... i do love the way the melody switches up halfway thru that second breakdown, then continues thru the remainder of the track. at the end of the track, you can hear a slight click that needs edited out of the back of that pad.