Ohhhhhh. I would not drop this. Levels are kinda all over and if was the dj I would be getting stares like " what the fuck are you doing" and it is the record lol....
Sorry to say it how it is.
To be honest the track isn't too offensive but the mix down is. The arrangement and even the style are cool...and I like hardstyle. But the mix is harsh...the first vocal that comes in would rip peoples heads off on a rig I reckon...and not in a sweet crystal clear way hun LOL 
Peace.
