okay, unique intro here w/ the halloween philharmonic thing going on.  hmm, not sure about that first break w/ the two different snares. production values here could use some serious attention. the idea seems to be pretty clear, but the execution is somewhat distracting. the breaks just don't punch the way they ought to, and the mix sounds murky.  becomes a bit samey, although with some more automation, filter sweeps, and layered up breaks, is an interesting idea for a tune. overall, i'd say focus more on production, and a fluid segue between ideas, as well as starting with high-quality samples.