really fragmented break at the intro, into a still-fragmented break, i love that kind of effect, where you find yourself swirling around, looking for the downbeat.  pretty crunchy break featured for the intro, that pad is pretty menacing, though i feel it could use some more effects, perhaps phaser or flanger.  i'm bracing myself for a real crusher, especially w/ this long siren effect. nice vocal sample, though i might hi pass it and throw some more reverb on it.

ooh, that reece is dirty as hell. some seriously good stuff here, you made VERY nice use of syncopation and repetition to throw the listener off.  when it finally starts rolling along again, it's a welcome return from the syncopation.  this feels like it was intended more for the dancefloor as a darker, ambient type tune, than a brutal heavy metal type tune.  i think more of that filthy bass would certainly be welcome.

yeah man, well done overall.  some pretty unique ideas in this piece.  there are not many elements to it, and yet you manage to not sound samey.  production is pretty tight, as is that