snare is muddy & clashy.
i'd put more thin & sharp one.
i think first breakdown is made too early.
second drop comes with another vibe. not good imho.
the beat has some feeling of bit reduction processing.
also not good.

that switching between diff vibes isnt kool imho.
extra psychodelic elements doesnt fit the scheme.
even percussion is bit reduced.
that kick trancy build up seems out of the vibe too.

too much mashed here imho.
i prefer more accurate style holding.
bass & percussion mashing looks senseless in the outro.