so the further I got through this track the more I realized how well it was mixed.  Might not be the top of the game, but nothing distracts my ear from anything else.. I can hear every element very clearly,  and for that you start off high, and it's the arrangment left to talk about.

1.) the vocal bits in the beginning didn't do it for me.  I like that you chopped them up and did something original with them, but the edits seemed dry and forced.  coulda used more release or reverb or something to make the cut off not so abrubt.

2.) it ends very suddenly..

3.) I can't imagine this track would be very good for general mixing because of it's format, but you may be aiming more for the arm chair than the dance floor, so I won't make to big a deal of it.  Really though, I felt like this track could have been longer to give room for the different elements to shine by themselves rather than all together at once.

I'm giving this one a 7, pretty solid, but nothing I'd pick up if I were to find it at the record store.  (hah, like I even GO to record stores anymore with online ordering being what it is..)