Some intros you can hear that a track is a killer track, like cranks. However this intro isnt very intresting need to work more on that. The samples miss depth and synths used are pretty stiff and synthish. The pianoe synthish thing used later is a bit harsh. The tune has nice power in the vibe and thats very important but alot of things could be carried out better. This track could need alot of attention regarding mixing and use of better samples. The drums drown in the mix. Many elements clash in the mix aswell making the whole tune very gritty and its hard to hear individual elements. Melodoic wise its intresting and alot of things going on. I think you have a very good feeling for what you want to do but need to get synths and mixing much more right.