this sounds almost exactly like the track I just listened too.. same 3 note bass line and timing..  do you guys know each other?

oh. once the vocal kicks in it changes it up.

this is pretty decent man, kinda bubbly bassline, almost something ram-ish about it.

I'm not sure what element is doing it, but SOMETHING in the track is making my ears hurt.

Kick drum sounds like it's peaking somewhere in the proccess, distorted in a bad way, know what I mean?  Snare sounds un-snare like..  You eq'd it wonderfully, it cuts right through, but I don't like the tone of it.  too musical..

this one also ends suddenly..  there wasn't much else to do, and I understand that, but I feel  like tracks should have a bit of no beat sound so you can mix them well into another track.

again, this is decent, but not great.  I'm giving you a 6.5, tying you with the guy who wrote almost the exact same track you did.